Rewrite each hook so it sounds like a thought someone has the moment they realize they did nothing after wasting a month.
Keep it short. Use simple words. Make it about what they did or didn’t do. End with what happened because of it.
If it sounds like writing, rewrite it.
Do not explain or justify. Do not use “I” statements. Avoid cause-and-effect phrasing like “so”. Write it as a blunt observation.
Hooks: {hooks}